Client Feedback On The Creation Of The Earth

A few notes on God's latest deliverable. One of McSweeney's 10 most-read pieces ever.

Working in advertising, I’ve become familiar with the phrases common in client feedback, and have even shamefully used them myself. I started playing around with these phrases, and decided they’d be funniest when applied to the most complex, awe-inspiring, and impossible-to-revise project in history: the Earth.